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Tuesday, 25 September 2012
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Writin' and awesome blog
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He took the midnight train goin' anywhere
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The smell of crisps and coke
For a smile they can share the night
It goes on and on and on and on
Strangers waiting
Up and down the boulevard
Their shadows searching in the night
Streetlight, people
Living just to find emotion
Hiding somewhere in the night
Working hard to get my fill,
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Just one more time
Some will win, some will lose
Some are born to sing the blues
And now the movie never ends
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(repeat)
Just a small town girl
Writin' and awesome blog
She took the midnight train goin' anywhere
Just a city boy, born and raised in South Detroit
He took the midnight train goin' anywhere
A writer with some writers block
The smell of crisps and coke
For a smile they can share the night
It goes on and on and on and on
Strangers waiting
Up and down the boulevard
Their shadows searching in the night
Streetlight, people
Living just to find emotion
Hiding somewhere in the night
Working hard to get my fill,
Everybody wants a thrill
Payin' anything to roll the dice
Just one more time
Some will win, some will lose
Some are born to sing the blues
And now the movie never ends
It goes on and on and on and on
Don't stop readin'
this is an awesome blog
Recomend People!
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Tuesday, 17 July 2012
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Friday, 6 July 2012
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Tuesday, 5 June 2012
Here.
Here you go. Chapter 4. The final chapter.
The light turned on quickly, but not as quickly as my nose registered the scent of blood. It hung around the room like the scent of rubbish at a dump. I looked up. Yuri.
'You son of a.....'
'Language my dear.' He patted my forehead patronizingly. 'We wouldn't want Brendan here getting any ideas on bad behaviour, would me?'
'Course not. He's obviously the favourite.' I let him slap me. Brendan lurched forward but was pulled back by a bodyguard. Despite what people may think, I don't love Brendan. I can't, not in that way. But still I can't help it when I see him in trouble. I stood up. Sorta. The chair was tied to me. I span round, whacking Yuri in his smug little face. Then it happened.
Brendan jumping at the guards taking them out with a gun he found, leaving Yuri. He stood up slowly. Wiping the blood from his cheek. Holding a gun pointed at Yuri, Brendan still managed to, somehow, cut my ropes and kick the chair out of the way.
'Yuri. I have had enough. Enough of you. Enough of your games. I want to be at home now.' I looked at the clock. 'Yes. Get me home now. Stop bothering my friends. And, most importantly, leave my brother the hell alone!'
'Fine. But you must find out where we are before I send you home.' I looked round. An alley way. Flats surrounded. Not nice ones. Half derelict. The type you'd think not even a rat would live in. I looked along the bottom windows. I saw her. My beautiful little girl.
I dropped my gun. Brendan dropped his. But didn't stay. He ran.
'Changed your mind? Didn't think you'd get out of here then?' He looked smug.
'No, Yuri. Your wrong. I'm home.' He didn't waste time. He got straight to the point. Begging wasn't what he wanted. I suddenly thought about my daughter, Eve, only 9, her father died fighting. My life was flashing by, but my wedding kiss stayed the longest.
I was crying. Yuri kept shouting. Until I was begging. Then he looked sympathetic.
‘I just can’t have you blabbing out my name to the cops, not again. It's nothing personal.'
Blood stained my frilly white shirt. I clutched my chest. I fell. Yuri walked off. I repeated It's just business as he walked off. My daughter screamed. She ran to me.
'Eve, look at me. Mummy loves you. She always has, always will.' I kissed her and closed my eyes.
The light turned on quickly, but not as quickly as my nose registered the scent of blood. It hung around the room like the scent of rubbish at a dump. I looked up. Yuri.
'You son of a.....'
'Language my dear.' He patted my forehead patronizingly. 'We wouldn't want Brendan here getting any ideas on bad behaviour, would me?'
'Course not. He's obviously the favourite.' I let him slap me. Brendan lurched forward but was pulled back by a bodyguard. Despite what people may think, I don't love Brendan. I can't, not in that way. But still I can't help it when I see him in trouble. I stood up. Sorta. The chair was tied to me. I span round, whacking Yuri in his smug little face. Then it happened.
Brendan jumping at the guards taking them out with a gun he found, leaving Yuri. He stood up slowly. Wiping the blood from his cheek. Holding a gun pointed at Yuri, Brendan still managed to, somehow, cut my ropes and kick the chair out of the way.
'Yuri. I have had enough. Enough of you. Enough of your games. I want to be at home now.' I looked at the clock. 'Yes. Get me home now. Stop bothering my friends. And, most importantly, leave my brother the hell alone!'
'Fine. But you must find out where we are before I send you home.' I looked round. An alley way. Flats surrounded. Not nice ones. Half derelict. The type you'd think not even a rat would live in. I looked along the bottom windows. I saw her. My beautiful little girl.
I dropped my gun. Brendan dropped his. But didn't stay. He ran.
'Changed your mind? Didn't think you'd get out of here then?' He looked smug.
'No, Yuri. Your wrong. I'm home.' He didn't waste time. He got straight to the point. Begging wasn't what he wanted. I suddenly thought about my daughter, Eve, only 9, her father died fighting. My life was flashing by, but my wedding kiss stayed the longest.
I was crying. Yuri kept shouting. Until I was begging. Then he looked sympathetic.
‘I just can’t have you blabbing out my name to the cops, not again. It's nothing personal.'
Blood stained my frilly white shirt. I clutched my chest. I fell. Yuri walked off. I repeated It's just business as he walked off. My daughter screamed. She ran to me.
'Eve, look at me. Mummy loves you. She always has, always will.' I kissed her and closed my eyes.
Wednesday, 30 May 2012
Hey!
HAVE YOUR SAY!! YOU'VE READ MIDNIGHT SHADE??!!?!?!?!? SO GIVE ME YOUR FEEDBACK!! TELL ME WHAT YOU WANT TO HAPPEN IN CHAPTER 4!! :):):):):):)
Tuesday, 22 May 2012
SSMS
Previously on Super Small Mini Stickman:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH THE BUNNY CAPTURED SUPER SMALL MINI STICKMAN! HOW WILL HE SURVIVE!? TUNE IN NEXT TIME TO FIND OUT IF HE SURVIVES AND HOW!
Well let's find out!!!
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OH NO! THE BUNNY IS DIGGING THROUGH THE GROUND!!
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HE ESCAPED!! WILL THE BUNNY SEEK REVENGE? WILL BOB MAKE IT HOME? TUNE IN NEXT TIME!!!!!!!!!!!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH THE BUNNY CAPTURED SUPER SMALL MINI STICKMAN! HOW WILL HE SURVIVE!? TUNE IN NEXT TIME TO FIND OUT IF HE SURVIVES AND HOW!
Well let's find out!!!
_________________________()()
(="=)
(") (")lol
OH NO! THE BUNNY IS DIGGING THROUGH THE GROUND!!
_____________________________/|__|\ (This is a place in China.)
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___________(") (")lol_____________/|__|\
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HE ESCAPED!! WILL THE BUNNY SEEK REVENGE? WILL BOB MAKE IT HOME? TUNE IN NEXT TIME!!!!!!!!!!!
Monday, 21 May 2012
Chapter 3.
Chapter three.
woke up in my apartment. There was something on my door, but my eyes were blury and couldn't focus. I reached out and felt a piece of paper I pulled it towards my face. It read:Morning (or evening depends on when you decided to get up),
I (your taxi driver) brought you in here and covered you up with the blankets as you were asleep when we arrived at your house? Yes, yes House! Sorry for my repetition, I struggle with the English language. I was just writing this note for you to read. Ummm, aha! I was to write you saying the bill is on the house, for last nights ride. You don't need worry. I hope you don't think me a trespasser for entering your home. I also left my business card for you!
I laughed and picked up the business card. Hmm. I wasn't sure if I'd need it so I stuffed it in my purse. Oh wait! I still had Brendan's phone. I reached in my pocket and pulled it out. I called my phone.
'Hello? This is the owner of the phone you are using.' I said.
'I knew you would want this back sooner or later. Very clever to delete your contacts. Carlotta.' No. It couldn't be Yuri. But it was someone who could mimic him. Well. I knew two people that could do that. And as far as I knew one was in prison and the other was Brendan. Oh Brendan. I could play him so well.
'How do you know my name?' I started with just the one question. Easing my way into it I think.
'It was on the back of your phone.' He replied.
'It was on the back of my phone? Well where is it now?' I tried not to laugh.
'I rubbed it off, and wrote it on paper.' Yeah like Yuri would do that. Too much thinking.
'Why do you have my phone?'
'Why do you have my phone?' He replied with a question.
'Aha!' I recognised the sigh. I'd caught him. 'Got ya, Brendan.'
'Can I ask? When did you get it was me?' I laughed.
'Yuri wouldn't look at my contacts. I don't have any. Plus you lost your accent at points, oh and not to mention I saw you take my phone and the only two people that can mimic Yuri are you and that dude in prison.'
'Ahahaha. I must perfect these things...' We laughed. 'Your phone is on it's way.' My mail box's flag went up, my phone hung up. Sometimes I just loved Brendan. Others, well there's too many things I don't want to mention. I walked out to get my phone and put Brendan's in as he came up behind me. He hugged me and I jumped.
'What are you doing!' He laughed. I tried to get away but his grip tightened. 'Brendan you've
got me. Let go.'
'Yes Brendan let go.' Yuri. It was a trap. Brendan let go. I turned around. I didn't even look at Yuri. And I slapped Brendan.
Next thing I know, I get picked up and hurled into the back of a van. A black one.
Quote/Question of the day.
This is how the quote came about, me and a friend were in French and learning about countries and their languages and I (I was in a random mood) said:
Do They Speak Italian in Spain?
We instantly burst into laughter and my teacher just shook her head and carried on.
Do They Speak Italian in Spain?
We instantly burst into laughter and my teacher just shook her head and carried on.
Saturday, 21 April 2012
The Ghost's of My Past.
This is a poem I wrote myself, for a competition on a writing website, I had to write something to do with a certain picture. (I shall try and get it on here).
If I should wake before I die someone out there will not care.
There are men around here who dare,
Dare to stare right at myself.
Like I'm a toy sitting on the shelf.
If I should wake before I die the men will follow,
Even into hell, The old and hollow,
Narrow trees or flames of hell?
What will await me? A life in a well?
If I should wake before I die some will cry.
I shall be rid of these men, but not for long.
My final words will be a song,
A song, showing why these men,
Must watch and torture me, but when?
If I should wake before I die the ghosts of my past,
Will leave me soon, like a cast.
The men they were evil, they attacked me,
They did it just to see,
To see if a human could live,
Live with the horror or have a memory like a sieve?
I am alone,
But have spectators, I cannot moan.
Some of them are young,
Some among,
Are just plain old.
If I should wake before I die,
Some will laugh, some will cry.
Some will never leave my side to let me die.
The Ghost's of My Past,
By jellyfish.
If I should wake before I die someone out there will not care.
There are men around here who dare,
Dare to stare right at myself.
Like I'm a toy sitting on the shelf.
If I should wake before I die the men will follow,
Even into hell, The old and hollow,
Narrow trees or flames of hell?
What will await me? A life in a well?
If I should wake before I die some will cry.
I shall be rid of these men, but not for long.
My final words will be a song,
A song, showing why these men,
Must watch and torture me, but when?
If I should wake before I die the ghosts of my past,
Will leave me soon, like a cast.
The men they were evil, they attacked me,
They did it just to see,
To see if a human could live,
Live with the horror or have a memory like a sieve?
I am alone,
But have spectators, I cannot moan.
Some of them are young,
Some among,
Are just plain old.
If I should wake before I die,
Some will laugh, some will cry.
Some will never leave my side to let me die.
The Ghost's of My Past,
By jellyfish.
Thursday, 19 April 2012
Dansk blog.
Hej folk fra Danmark!
Hvordan har du det hele? Jeg er god tak! God fornøjelse dette indlæg på dansk, vil der være mere i vente!
I'm sooooooo sorry guys!
I'm really sorry I haven't posted in a while but I've been busy! But here you go. Chapter TWO!!
Chapter 2.
It was morning and I was lying on my stone cold metal bed, Brendan was lying on the floor using his jacket as a blanket. I looked a Brendan, at the bruises on his body, at the cuts. They were torturing him. But why?
‘What’s up Carly?’ he croaked.
‘Nothing Brendan.’ Some men opened the cell door and pointed at both of us.
‘Oi, sorry to break up the chit-chat but the boss needs you.’ The one speaking grabbed me by my colour then handed me a dress. ‘Put this on.’
Brendan wasn’t so fortunate; instead he was dragged out the room screaming ‘I will never tell!’ ‘It isn’t for me to tell!’ I stood staring at him whilst holding the dress.
‘Get on with it!’ the guard said. I coughed ‘ahem’ and pointed at myself then at the guard, telling him to go away. They all left and I changed in silence. I wanted to know how this man new me, I didn’t recognise him. How did he have Brendan.
I knocked on the door about 10 minutes later and the guard came over. He took one look at me and did a wolf whistle. ‘Just let me out ok?’ he nodded at me and opened the door and lead me to the car park.
‘Miss Carlotta, nice of you to... accompany me.’ The mystery man said. ‘In the car please.’ I sat in the car and saw Brendan. In a suit. Brendan. In a suit. I did a double take on him.
‘Surprised? Me too Carly.’ He seemed cleaner than before. Maybe they cleaned him up? ‘Nice dress, you never dressed up for me’ he said in a sarcastic yet funny way.
‘Yeah well, you weren’t exactly perfect either.’ He laughed. Then the man sat down.
‘Don’t stop just because I am here.’ He insisted.
We drove in silence but when we arrived Brendan and I gasped. ‘Shut your mouths you two’ he said. We followed him in and he checked us in. We sat down and I made a note to remember the waiters name; Rico.
‘Lobster with the sour cream sauce and champagne please’ I answered to Rico.
‘I suppose you are wondering who I am. And why I brought you here.’
‘And why you kidnapped my friend’ I mumbled.
‘I had no other way of getting you here.’ He responded. Brendan chuckled then sighed.
‘Anyway’ Brendan said.
‘Ah yes, anyway I am Mr Ivan Viktor Yury. Perhaps you’ve heard of me?’ We both nodded. Terrified. ‘I brought Brendan because he has some vital information we need. You are here because I know you. I know that you’ve had experience in theft, murder and escape.’ That was when for the first time I saw Yuri without his gloves on. ‘Everyone knows about why I wear these dreadfully uncomfortable gloves.’ His hands were as white as snow with black blotches and red knuckles.
He started to explain how this happened when Brendan got up and excused himself to the loo. Then he winked at me and left the building.
2 hours passed when Yuri paid the bill and left the building. I followed him but he was gone. He had left me. ‘You gonna stand there all night?’ I turned and saw Brendan leaning against the wall of the restaurant. He smiled at me and came over. He saw I was angry and hurt. ‘What’s wrong?’ his voice was full of sympathy.
‘I had to sit for 3 hours with the most evil man in the world who should be in prison, now I have to walk god knows how many miles to get home! So don’t ask me “what’s wrong?”’ I quoted his voice with sarcasm, he sensed it and sighed.
‘Carly, I’m sorry. I didn’t think you’d’ I gestured my hand at him. He looked genuinely sorry. But I couldn’t afford to waste time. I pulled out my phone. Wait. I felt all my pockets. Of course. AH! Why was I so stupid! I walked over to Brendan, leant forward kissed him, he kissed back of course. I reached my hand down to his jacket pocket and pulled out his phone. ‘Hey! Carly! Come back! Come on!’ He chased me for about three blocks then stopped.
I dialled the Taxi service number on the card I kept in my hair clip. ‘Hello? How long will it take for you to get to...to... ummm’ I looked around for a street name.
‘We GPS phones if you are lost.’ A voice said.
‘Brilliant.’
‘Let me just put you on hold.’ Some olden time music came on so I sat on a bench I found earlier. ‘We will be approximately five more minutes, I am very sorry for the wait.’
‘It’s fine’ I relaxed my shoulders knowing I would be home in, hopefully, 20 minutes most.
When the taxi eventually arrived, it was 10pm. I saw it and dragged myself over to it. I checked the driver. Not one of Yuri’s men. Good. I jumped in the back and fastened my seatbelt. We drove and drove for what seemed like miles, and when we finally arrived I was fast asleep. The driver sighed.
Monday, 9 April 2012
Story Tips XD
Part One:
Ideas
People often wonder where writers get their ideas for stories. It takes so many ideas to make a story or a novel! Here's a secret: writers don't think of all those ideas. They steal them! Not really, but they find ideas from many sources and combine them to make an original story.
Look for ideas in real life, such as funny quotes, interesting people, or occurrences at school.
Consider your favorite stories. You can use elements of them to make a new story.
Brainstorm! Combine several ideas to form the basis of a new story. For example, Harry Potter books combine school, sports, destiny, a kid in a "Cinderella" type situation, battles between good and evil, and magic to create compelling stories.
Part Two: Sketch the "basics" of your story
These are the basics of all stories:
1. Sympathetic character
2. Who faces a problem
3. Character solves problem
Don't get into details, but have an idea of your main character and the conflict.
Part Three: Fill in the details: Character and Conflict
Character
First, build your main character. Here are important traits of a main character:
Has a problem or need.
Has the ability to solve the problem, whether or not he knows it (there's usually more suspense if he doesn't).
Often has a flaw to overcome to solve the problem or win the reward.
Then, think about your secondary characters: the main character's friends and enemies. To get you started, I've listed some types of secondary characters, along with famous examples of each.
Villains: Block the main character from reaching goals. (The Green Goblin in Spider-Man)
Allies: Assist the main character in reaching goals. (Robin in Batman)
Mentors: Wise characters that help the main character. (Obi-Wan Kenobi in Star Wars)
Jokers: Lighten things up! Often the main character's best friend is a joker. (Donkey in Shrek)
Tips on creating characters:
If you already have a plot in mind, think of who needs this plot -- who has a need the plot's reward would fulfill? Who could grow by overcoming the obstacles? That is your main character.
Combine different types of characters. Examples: a funny villain (Dr. Evil in Austin Powers); a mentor who is also a joker (Hagrid in Harry Potter); a villain that becomes an ally and helps the main character solve the real problem (Floop in Spy Kids).
Conflict -- a storyteller's best friend
The stronger the story problem, the stronger the story.
Don't be nice to your character! Create obstacles to the goal. The story is more exciting that way, the character learns more, and the reward is more valuable since the character worked so hard for it.
The classic conflicts: These are ideas to get you started.
Person versus person: The most popular, since conflicts between people are the most interesting to readers. (Example: Cinderella and her wicked stepmother)
Person versus himself: Conflict between good and evil or strengths and weaknesses in a character. This is deep stuff and not usually the main conflict. (Example: The Grinch is evil and hates Christmas, but he is not evil at heart -- he is like that because someone hurt him. The Grinch feels inner conflict over the good and evil inside of him.)
Person versus nature: Usually involves natural disasters or survival skills. This conflict is exciting, but often difficult to write about at length. (Example: The character in Jurassic Park must survive in and escape from a dangerous land of dinosaurs.)
Tips on creating conflict
Combine different types of conflict. Maybe your characters struggle to survive and fight among themselves.
Add more conflicts and obstacles if your story seems slow or not "big" enough.
Before you write, know how the problem will be solved. Don't write yourself into a hole!
The main character must solve the problem. Don't have someone (or something) enter at the last minute and save the day.
Part Four: Planning the Plot
Character and conflict are the heart of your story. The plot is just the sequence of events that happen as the character faces problems. Here are a few things to remember about plotting:
A plot is based on cause and effect.
The plot follows the effects of the character's actions and decisions.
Avoid a series of events. You want a chain of events, each affecting the next. Each link in the chain should be necessary to your story!
Elements of most plots
Plan these scenes and you should be ready to write. I've used examples from the movie Shrek.
"Get the story going" event: Show character's problem & event that starts adventure. (Shrek's swamp is ruined when Lord Farquaad puts fairy tale creatures there. Lord Farquaad promises to remove the fairy tale creatures after Shrek rescues Princess Fiona.)
Adventure scene(s): Meet friends & enemies, face obstacles, learn lessons, prepare for...(Shrek meets Donkey, they rescue Princess Fiona and set off for Duloc. Along the way, they become friends and have adventures, like fighting Robin Hood and his Merry Men.)
THE BIG EVENT: Everything is on the line. Most exciting part of story. (The wedding scene.)
Wrap-up: Tie up the loose ends and hand out rewards & punishments. (Shrek marries Fiona, Donkey falls in love with the dragon, and Farquaad is eaten by the dragon.)
Part Five: Plan your scenes
Scenes: how you show your plot
Decide how to show action, plot, character interactions, lessons characters learn, etc. Example: Don't just say, "Alex was shy." Have Alex demonstrate shyness by the way he interacts with others. Later, show Alex has gotten over his shyness by having him face someone he was previously afraid of.
Each scene needs a beginning, middle, and end. See if you can use the end of one scene to transition to the beginning of another, and so on.
Don't write a short scene for a major event, and don't make a scene out of something that doesn't need to be. Example: If several uneventful days go by as a character waits for important test results, don't write several day's worth of boring events. Skip to the test results and show the character has waited for days.
Dialogue
Dialogue does many things for your story.
Reveals character (especially through reactions)
Advances plot
Brings scenes to life
Adjusts the story's pace
TAKES UP SPACE!!! (Start a new paragraph every time a new character speaks. This takes up space, which is useful if you need a story of a certain length.)
Tips on writing dialogue
Avoid long greetings and goodbyes. These slow the story and add little.
Convey character by showing a character's reaction or way of speaking.
Don't use dialogue as a substitute for action. Example: If you have an earthquake in your story, write a great earthquake scene with lots of action. Don't have a character say "Oh! An earthquake!" and leave it at that.
Setting
Plan your setting -- know details about it. This makes your story more vivid.
Setting helps you avoid "floating" scenes -- conversation or action that could be happening anywhere.
Setting adds atmosphere to scenes. Example: In a beach story, a character might compare Aunt Mary's screeching to a seagull. In a city story, Aunt Mary might remind the character of a burglar alarm.
In some books, the setting is like a character. Example: Survival stories like Gary Paulsen's Hatchet.
Start with a bang! Your story's opening scene
Start with the day that is different -- the day the hero is called to adventure
Start your story as close to the "big event" as you can
Show the main character and the problem, or hint at the problem.
Use action to get your story rolling and make your reader want to see what happens next.
Part Six: Write
Sometimes writers find that important parts of their BIG SCENE were not properly set up earlier in the story. For example, if your character solves a riddle in the big scene, you need to show earlier in the story that your character is good at riddles.
People often wonder where writers get their ideas for stories. It takes so many ideas to make a story or a novel! Here's a secret: writers don't think of all those ideas. They steal them! Not really, but they find ideas from many sources and combine them to make an original story.
Look for ideas in real life, such as funny quotes, interesting people, or occurrences at school.
Consider your favorite stories. You can use elements of them to make a new story.
Brainstorm! Combine several ideas to form the basis of a new story. For example, Harry Potter books combine school, sports, destiny, a kid in a "Cinderella" type situation, battles between good and evil, and magic to create compelling stories.
Part Two: Sketch the "basics" of your story
These are the basics of all stories:
1. Sympathetic character
2. Who faces a problem
3. Character solves problem
Don't get into details, but have an idea of your main character and the conflict.
Part Three: Fill in the details: Character and Conflict
Character
First, build your main character. Here are important traits of a main character:
Has a problem or need.
Has the ability to solve the problem, whether or not he knows it (there's usually more suspense if he doesn't).
Often has a flaw to overcome to solve the problem or win the reward.
Then, think about your secondary characters: the main character's friends and enemies. To get you started, I've listed some types of secondary characters, along with famous examples of each.
Villains: Block the main character from reaching goals. (The Green Goblin in Spider-Man)
Allies: Assist the main character in reaching goals. (Robin in Batman)
Mentors: Wise characters that help the main character. (Obi-Wan Kenobi in Star Wars)
Jokers: Lighten things up! Often the main character's best friend is a joker. (Donkey in Shrek)
Tips on creating characters:
If you already have a plot in mind, think of who needs this plot -- who has a need the plot's reward would fulfill? Who could grow by overcoming the obstacles? That is your main character.
Combine different types of characters. Examples: a funny villain (Dr. Evil in Austin Powers); a mentor who is also a joker (Hagrid in Harry Potter); a villain that becomes an ally and helps the main character solve the real problem (Floop in Spy Kids).
Conflict -- a storyteller's best friend
The stronger the story problem, the stronger the story.
Don't be nice to your character! Create obstacles to the goal. The story is more exciting that way, the character learns more, and the reward is more valuable since the character worked so hard for it.
The classic conflicts: These are ideas to get you started.
Person versus person: The most popular, since conflicts between people are the most interesting to readers. (Example: Cinderella and her wicked stepmother)
Person versus himself: Conflict between good and evil or strengths and weaknesses in a character. This is deep stuff and not usually the main conflict. (Example: The Grinch is evil and hates Christmas, but he is not evil at heart -- he is like that because someone hurt him. The Grinch feels inner conflict over the good and evil inside of him.)
Person versus nature: Usually involves natural disasters or survival skills. This conflict is exciting, but often difficult to write about at length. (Example: The character in Jurassic Park must survive in and escape from a dangerous land of dinosaurs.)
Tips on creating conflict
Combine different types of conflict. Maybe your characters struggle to survive and fight among themselves.
Add more conflicts and obstacles if your story seems slow or not "big" enough.
Before you write, know how the problem will be solved. Don't write yourself into a hole!
The main character must solve the problem. Don't have someone (or something) enter at the last minute and save the day.
Part Four: Planning the Plot
Character and conflict are the heart of your story. The plot is just the sequence of events that happen as the character faces problems. Here are a few things to remember about plotting:
A plot is based on cause and effect.
The plot follows the effects of the character's actions and decisions.
Avoid a series of events. You want a chain of events, each affecting the next. Each link in the chain should be necessary to your story!
Elements of most plots
Plan these scenes and you should be ready to write. I've used examples from the movie Shrek.
"Get the story going" event: Show character's problem & event that starts adventure. (Shrek's swamp is ruined when Lord Farquaad puts fairy tale creatures there. Lord Farquaad promises to remove the fairy tale creatures after Shrek rescues Princess Fiona.)
Adventure scene(s): Meet friends & enemies, face obstacles, learn lessons, prepare for...(Shrek meets Donkey, they rescue Princess Fiona and set off for Duloc. Along the way, they become friends and have adventures, like fighting Robin Hood and his Merry Men.)
THE BIG EVENT: Everything is on the line. Most exciting part of story. (The wedding scene.)
Wrap-up: Tie up the loose ends and hand out rewards & punishments. (Shrek marries Fiona, Donkey falls in love with the dragon, and Farquaad is eaten by the dragon.)
Part Five: Plan your scenes
Scenes: how you show your plot
Decide how to show action, plot, character interactions, lessons characters learn, etc. Example: Don't just say, "Alex was shy." Have Alex demonstrate shyness by the way he interacts with others. Later, show Alex has gotten over his shyness by having him face someone he was previously afraid of.
Each scene needs a beginning, middle, and end. See if you can use the end of one scene to transition to the beginning of another, and so on.
Don't write a short scene for a major event, and don't make a scene out of something that doesn't need to be. Example: If several uneventful days go by as a character waits for important test results, don't write several day's worth of boring events. Skip to the test results and show the character has waited for days.
Dialogue
Dialogue does many things for your story.
Reveals character (especially through reactions)
Advances plot
Brings scenes to life
Adjusts the story's pace
TAKES UP SPACE!!! (Start a new paragraph every time a new character speaks. This takes up space, which is useful if you need a story of a certain length.)
Tips on writing dialogue
Avoid long greetings and goodbyes. These slow the story and add little.
Convey character by showing a character's reaction or way of speaking.
Don't use dialogue as a substitute for action. Example: If you have an earthquake in your story, write a great earthquake scene with lots of action. Don't have a character say "Oh! An earthquake!" and leave it at that.
Setting
Plan your setting -- know details about it. This makes your story more vivid.
Setting helps you avoid "floating" scenes -- conversation or action that could be happening anywhere.
Setting adds atmosphere to scenes. Example: In a beach story, a character might compare Aunt Mary's screeching to a seagull. In a city story, Aunt Mary might remind the character of a burglar alarm.
In some books, the setting is like a character. Example: Survival stories like Gary Paulsen's Hatchet.
Start with a bang! Your story's opening scene
Start with the day that is different -- the day the hero is called to adventure
Start your story as close to the "big event" as you can
Show the main character and the problem, or hint at the problem.
Use action to get your story rolling and make your reader want to see what happens next.
Part Six: Write
I don't
write until I've planned my character, conflict, scenes, and especially my
opening. In your rough draft, just concentrate on getting it all on paper. You
can go back and fix things later.
Part Seven:
Revise
It's
important to correct spelling and grammar mistakes, but first, make sure your
story is in good shape. Look at your plan again and make sure that you showed
those things in your story. Here are two examples:
Sometimes
writers plan a great character, but reread their rough draft and discover they
left out important information about the character. Check that you showed the
character's problem, strengths, and weaknesses.Sometimes writers find that important parts of their BIG SCENE were not properly set up earlier in the story. For example, if your character solves a riddle in the big scene, you need to show earlier in the story that your character is good at riddles.
I hope these
tips help you create wonderful stories!
Have fun! Good luck!
Wednesday, 28 March 2012
Well you guys!
You really shocked me guys! Wow! 204 viewers! That's A-MA-ZING!!! well I guess I'll have to give you chapter 1 now. And peeps, don't be afraid to comment!! Nice long chapter this time :)
Chapter 1.
It felt like it
does in movies. Like when the camera goes slow motion. When the surroundings
are finally realised by the main character.
I walked through
the middle of it. I felt deaf to the surroundings. Like I wasn’t there. People
were dying all around me. One by one. I was the mystery girl. I was the last
person to see the victim before they died and the first one to leave when the
cops started asking questions.
‘Help! Help!
Please Help me!’ a voice called from the distance. I don’t know why but my feet
started running towards the voice. A woman was being attacked. Mugged. I
stepped forward. I pulled the man away and punched him. Hard. He fell to the
ground. Thud! I helped the woman get away and called the cops. He got arrested.
Taken and locked away.
The lady thanked
me and I left her. Night was coming. I sat on my bed and thought about the
day’s events. About how normal my job is. How normal my life is. How boring it
all is. I sighed. Ring! Ring! I picked up the phone. Soon to regret it.
‘Hello?’
‘Hello, is this
Miss Carlotta of Flare street?’ asked a deep male voice.
I panicked. Blood
pumped through my veins. ‘Yes this is Carlotta speaking. How can I help you?’
‘You can start by
following the instructions I left in your house. You have 2 minutes remaining
to find them. See you soon Carlotta.’
My heart pounded
in my chest. In a mad rush I ran round my room. I picked up an envelope.
Sealed. I opened the seal. I pulled out the letter.
Dear Miss Carlotta of Flare Street,
Your instructions are with held in this
letter. It is your choice whether you choose to obey them or not is up to you.
Meet me at the old bread mill at midnight.
Once you come, Miss Carlotta, there is no going back what so ever. The only way
you can back out is if something terrible happens to you.
You may want to seriously consider coming.
I have something or someone very special to you with me.
Signed, your new boss.
I stared at the
letter. What could he have? I read it over.
Ding! Ding! 10
rings. 10pm.
Ding! Ding! 11
rings. 11pm. I started to get dressed. I put my gun in my pocket and my knife
in my boot. I called a taxi and told it to be outside my door at exactly
11:40pm.
11:40pm the taxi
arrived not a moment late. I got in. Told him to take me to the Old Bread Mill.
The ride was short and bumpy. It was midnight when I got there. I stepped out
of the car. I recognised the man instantly. Black suit. Sleek black hair. Yep
this was the man.
‘Hello Carlotta, I
am Mr.... We have time for that later. Get in the car please.’ I nodded and got
in. ‘Sorry about this.’ He said in a sly voice. He put a sack on my head.
Blindfolded. The journey felt long. I
heard deep voices around me talking and laughing occasionally. I managed to
make out part of a conversation.
‘So what’s she got
to do with it then?’ one deep voiced man asked.
‘That’s for me to
know and for her to find out.’ Said the boss.
‘We’re here!’
called the driver. The limo came to a sudden halt and I fell forwards. Someone
caught me and I could feel myself being carried as the men walked.
The light came on
quickly. Bright, I thought, very bright. The sack had been removed and I had
been put in a chair in front of the boss who was sat in his big office chair.
‘You decided to
come after all then? I don’t blame your curiosity. You just want to know what
has happened to your friend. Never mind that for now, Carlotta.’ He said my
name in such a venomous way it was like he was comparing me to the Devil
himself. ‘Now I suppose you want to know why I brought you here?’ I nodded.
‘Well some people have upset me and my men in bad ways and we want some revenge
of our own.’ I gulped wondering what was next to come. ‘We want you to......
Kill them. But befriend them first. Find out anything worthwhile then kill them.
We are trusting you Carlotta.’
Before he spoke
again I found my self standing up and shouting ‘Why! Why me! I can’t kill
someone!’
‘Oh but you have
Carlotta, don’t play games with me I know your past.’
‘I’ve never killed
anyone!’ I said.
‘Oh yes I forgot,
sweet innocent Carlotta. Wouldn’t harm a soul. Always stood and watched.
Regretfully.’ I looked down in shame. ‘Have a drink Carlotta’ He held out a cup
to me. I sniffed it and took a sip.
I found myself
alone in a cell. Locked up. I sat up on the cold metal slab they called a bed.
I scanned my surroundings. I saw a figure sat in the corner.
‘Who’s
there?’ I said
‘Carlotta? Is that
you?’ croaked the figure.
‘Brendan?
Brendan!’ I called. I ran over to him and gave him a hug. ‘I missed you
Brendan.’
‘Missed you too
Carly.’ He gradually stood up, using me to lean on. He kissed my cheek and we
exchanged gossip, mainly about the past few days.
Monday, 26 March 2012
Story time...
Well my dears, *old lady specs* are you sitting confortably? Then lets BEGIN!!!!!
Intro.
I can’t stop now. I’ve done it once.
‘I just can’t have you blabbing out my name to the cops, it’s nothing personal.’ She was crying and begging on her knees. She promised not to tell. ‘It’s nothing personal, it’s just business.’ Blood stained her frilly white shirt as she clutched her chest. She fell to the ground. ‘Like I said, nothing personal just business.’ She repeated that to herself as I walked out of the dark alley-way.
I was home. Safe from the judging eyes of the public. For now. Knock! Knock! I answered the door. A short brunette child stood at my door, mouth wide open.
‘What d’ya want kiddo?’ I asked her. She looked straight at me. Terror.
‘You killed her’ She stuttered.
‘Who?’
‘My mum, in the alley. Last night.’ Tears rolled down her pale cheeks.
‘She knew too much....’ I couldn’t finish. I knew how it felt to lose someone close to you. ‘Where were you?’
She mumbled something then spoke up, ‘At the window on the bottom floor.’
Right, I thought to myself, I need to sort this kid out. She knows too much. She is only a kid though. ‘Kiddo, I won’t kill you if you become my...... apprentice.’ She nodded respectfully.
thats all you get for now! Reach 200 viewers and you get Chapter 1. Chapter 2 if you reach 210 or if you reach 10 comments on this saying pwetty pwease.
Thursday, 22 March 2012
Well my lovelies...
We are reaching nearly 200 viewers! considering I only started a while ago this is amazing! So I promise you, if you get up to 200 viewers I will, *dun dun dunnnnnnnn* Write you up my story! I will do it in sections as it is very long and not finished yet, also there will be a new special episode of Ssms :) (Super small mini stickman!)
Tuesday, 20 March 2012
Super small mini Stickman!
*spongebob theme song* WRONG SONG JIMMY!!! *sorry* *horror movie music* Oh for goodness sake! *changes track to super man tune* I didn't even know there was a superman song but awesome!
*music plays as the words Super small mini Stickman and his picture appear*
|__lol-| He's so lazy. I know! hehehehehehehehe I has an evils plans! *coughs*
|___-| lol |_|
|___-| |_| lol _
|lol_
|_
|lol_ *mum* STOP JUMPING DOWN THE STAIRS YOU ELEPHANT!. *me* she needs a chillpill.
|_|' (front door has doorbell ooooooooooo)
|_|' lol *Stickman* Bye mum! see you later!
|_|'_______________________________lol_________________________|=|F|=|A|=|R|=|M|=|
|_|'_____________________________________________lol___________|=|F|=|A|=|R|=|M|=|
|_|'______________________________________________________lol__|=|F|=|A|=|R|=|M|=|
|=|F|=|A|=|R|=|M|=|_lol_____(00)~ (ITS A PIG!!!)
|=|F|=|A|=|R|=|M|=|____lol_(00)~ *stickman* Hi Piggers! Please move yo butt away from ma path! *pig* Oink!
|=|F|=|A|=|R|=|M|=|____(00)~lol *stickman* HES CAUGHT ME ON HIS TAIL!! HELLLP!!!
_____________lol~(00)___ HES RUNNING TO THE MUD PUDDLE!
______________________________lol~(00)________HE WENT THE WRONG WAY! HES HEADING TO THE CAT HOME FOR ELDERLY BUNNIES!
_____________() ()____________________(00)~lol_______________
(="=)
(") (")
_____________() ()____________lol_____________________________the pig vanished
(="=)
(") (")
_____________() ()___________________________________
(="=)lol
(") (")
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH THE BUNNY CAPTURED SUPER SMALL MINI STICKMAN! HOW WILL HE SURVIVE!? TUNE IN NEXT TIME TO FIND OUT IF HE SURVIVES AND HOW!
*music plays as the words Super small mini Stickman and his picture appear*
|__lol-| He's so lazy. I know! hehehehehehehehe I has an evils plans! *coughs*
|___-| lol |_|
|___-| |_| lol _
|lol_
|_
|lol_ *mum* STOP JUMPING DOWN THE STAIRS YOU ELEPHANT!. *me* she needs a chillpill.
|_|' (front door has doorbell ooooooooooo)
|_|' lol *Stickman* Bye mum! see you later!
|_|'_______________________________lol_________________________|=|F|=|A|=|R|=|M|=|
|_|'_____________________________________________lol___________|=|F|=|A|=|R|=|M|=|
|_|'______________________________________________________lol__|=|F|=|A|=|R|=|M|=|
|=|F|=|A|=|R|=|M|=|_lol_____(00)~ (ITS A PIG!!!)
|=|F|=|A|=|R|=|M|=|____lol_(00)~ *stickman* Hi Piggers! Please move yo butt away from ma path! *pig* Oink!
|=|F|=|A|=|R|=|M|=|____(00)~lol *stickman* HES CAUGHT ME ON HIS TAIL!! HELLLP!!!
_____________lol~(00)___ HES RUNNING TO THE MUD PUDDLE!
______________________________lol~(00)________HE WENT THE WRONG WAY! HES HEADING TO THE CAT HOME FOR ELDERLY BUNNIES!
_____________() ()____________________(00)~lol_______________
(="=)
(") (")
_____________() ()____________lol_____________________________the pig vanished
(="=)
(") (")
_____________() ()___________________________________
(="=)lol
(") (")
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH THE BUNNY CAPTURED SUPER SMALL MINI STICKMAN! HOW WILL HE SURVIVE!? TUNE IN NEXT TIME TO FIND OUT IF HE SURVIVES AND HOW!
Tuesday, 13 March 2012
Русский блог!
Здравствуйте, как поживаете? Хорошо? мне тоже. Спасибо за чтение моего блога. Пожалуйста, рекомендую всем своим друзьям, чтобы прочитать это.
Saturday, 10 March 2012
Da poll is over..... :)
And here are the results!
Adventure in space
|
1 (25%)
|
Adventure in woods
|
1 (25%)
|
TV adventure series
|
2 (50%)
|
Farmyard Adventure
|
1 (25%)
|
All
|
4 (100%)
so to make it a wittle bwit easier I'm gonna make an adventure series using those ideas!!
|
Friday, 9 March 2012
OMG
OMG GUYS!! GUESS WHAT!!
WE'VE HIT 104 VIEWERS!! :) THANK YOU SO MUCH PEEPS! THIS WOULDN'T BE POSSIBLE WITHOUT YOU ALL!! so please recomend to your friends and hey, who knows we could go fully INTERNATIONAL!!
WE'VE HIT 104 VIEWERS!! :) THANK YOU SO MUCH PEEPS! THIS WOULDN'T BE POSSIBLE WITHOUT YOU ALL!! so please recomend to your friends and hey, who knows we could go fully INTERNATIONAL!!
To all you people out there. I care.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eAfyFTzZDMM (you are beautiful)
Just listen to this. Now put a smile on your pretty faces, take a deep breathe. Nothing can make you feel bad without your permission. Keep that in mind. Now your ready to face the day. Remember, I care.
Speak to me on comments if you need a pick me up. Or just if you've had a bad day.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GPHo72HjzYc (had a bad day)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LjhCEhWiKXk&ob=av2e (Just the way you are)
Just listen to this. Now put a smile on your pretty faces, take a deep breathe. Nothing can make you feel bad without your permission. Keep that in mind. Now your ready to face the day. Remember, I care.
Speak to me on comments if you need a pick me up. Or just if you've had a bad day.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GPHo72HjzYc (had a bad day)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LjhCEhWiKXk&ob=av2e (Just the way you are)
Voters updation
Hehe my title makes no sense! But anyway heres the Second Update for my poll!
Space- 1 Vote!
Woods- 1 Vote!
TV- 2 Votes!
Farmyard- 1 vote!
All- 4 votes!
Well my Spicy Beef Sausages, You have 1 Day left to Vote! Vote my pretties! Vote!
Space- 1 Vote!
Woods- 1 Vote!
TV- 2 Votes!
Farmyard- 1 vote!
All- 4 votes!
Well my Spicy Beef Sausages, You have 1 Day left to Vote! Vote my pretties! Vote!
Thursday, 8 March 2012
This time...
This time on Super small mini stickman!
|__lol-| *mum* Honey your late for school!
|___-| lol |_| (door)
|_| lol__________________ (path)
_______lol_________lolololololol (a gang blocks the way)
____________lol__lololololololol
____________lol_lolololololol (they are ganging up on him)
@@:~?>:@)&*&%^&£$!"!"£!£!$¬!!$£&*()&^&^%"@::L?:L?:::$":!":$:%::&%>&*:^£@~~~?<>~?<~~D~GFAAF!"!$%&$$*%*&£¬! (fight)
_______________________lol______________________________________|_school_|
_______________________lol____________2__________________________|_school_|
_______________________lol_________2_____________________________|_school_|
_______________________lol____2__________________________________|_school_|
_______________________lol_2_____________________________________|_school_|
_______________________lol_2______________________________________|_school_|
Why is there always a swan?
_______________________2¬lol______________________________________|_school_|
Now I'm scared.... where did he get a gun?
_______________________¬lol______________________________________|_school_|
____________________________________________________________lol_|_school_|
*end of school bell* *Bob says, 'Darn it'*
|__lol-| *mum* Honey your late for school!
|___-| lol |_| (door)
|_| lol__________________ (path)
_______lol_________lolololololol (a gang blocks the way)
____________lol__lololololololol
____________lol_lolololololol (they are ganging up on him)
@@:~?>:@)&*&%^&£$!"!"£!£!$¬!!$£&*()&^&^%"@::L?:L?:::$":!":$:%::&%>&*:^£@~~~?<>~?<~~D~GFAAF!"!$%&$$*%*&£¬! (fight)
_______________________lol______________________________________|_school_|
_______________________lol____________2__________________________|_school_|
_______________________lol_________2_____________________________|_school_|
_______________________lol____2__________________________________|_school_|
_______________________lol_2_____________________________________|_school_|
_______________________lol_2______________________________________|_school_|
Why is there always a swan?
_______________________2¬lol______________________________________|_school_|
Now I'm scared.... where did he get a gun?
_______________________¬lol______________________________________|_school_|
____________________________________________________________lol_|_school_|
*end of school bell* *Bob says, 'Darn it'*
Voting Update!
Hey guys I started a new poll and hey presto already have some votes!
In order from highest to lowest:
In order from highest to lowest:
- All (3 votes)
- Adventure series (2 votes)
- Adventures in space, woods and farmyards are all at the bottom with 1 vote each!!
VOTE NOW YOU SPICY BEEF SAUSAGES!!
Deutsch blog!
Hallo,
Wie geht es Ihnen heute? Gut, gut. Nicht zu bedeuten, aber ist mir egal, wie deine Schwester ist. Nein, ich scherze!
Also meine Freunde ist dies die erste von vielen deutschen Blogs! Ich hoffe, Sie haben es genossen!
Wie geht es Ihnen heute? Gut, gut. Nicht zu bedeuten, aber ist mir egal, wie deine Schwester ist. Nein, ich scherze!
Also meine Freunde ist dies die erste von vielen deutschen Blogs! Ich hoffe, Sie haben es genossen!
Happy International Womans Day!
As today is International womens day I am keen to make the men do everything! Oh don't be like that I'm only messing :) Well International Womens Day hmmmmmm what to do what to do......
Comment and tell me what YOUR going to be up to today! :)
(Don't worry guys I'm sure you'll get your turn one day....)
:)
Comment and tell me what YOUR going to be up to today! :)
(Don't worry guys I'm sure you'll get your turn one day....)
:)
Wednesday, 7 March 2012
To be continued....
Last time on Super small mini stickman.
2222222222222222222222222222222222lol2222222222222222 He was lost in a flock of swans!
This time.
222222222222222222222222lol22222222222222222222 The swans got bored.
22222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222 they dropped the dude!
lol
He fell for miles.
lol
He should be dead.
lol
But he's not.
|_____| (Thats his bed dummy)
|____-| (theres a pillow!)
^o^ (thats a close up on his face)
|__lol_-| (He landed in bed!)
How fricking unlikely is that man!
Want some grapes? *holds out handfull* No I'm not a weirdo.
Fine be like that. *eats grapes*
Want some more Super small mini stickman? WELL VOTE FOR IT YOU SPICY BEEF SAUSAGE!
2222222222222222222222222222222222lol2222222222222222 He was lost in a flock of swans!
This time.
222222222222222222222222lol22222222222222222222 The swans got bored.
22222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222 they dropped the dude!
lol
He fell for miles.
lol
He should be dead.
lol
But he's not.
|_____| (Thats his bed dummy)
|____-| (theres a pillow!)
^o^ (thats a close up on his face)
|__lol_-| (He landed in bed!)
How fricking unlikely is that man!
Want some grapes? *holds out handfull* No I'm not a weirdo.
Fine be like that. *eats grapes*
Want some more Super small mini stickman? WELL VOTE FOR IT YOU SPICY BEEF SAUSAGE!
So
Sooooo I guess you are wondering what the heck Super small mini stickman is? You werent?! Get out of here! No I'm only joking. Super small mini stickman is a stickman! He goes on many adventures like the shark pool one! heres another one!
----------------------------lol------------------------------- (He's drowning again)
---------------------------lol---------------2---------------- (Theres a swan)
--------------------------lol-------2--------------------- (its getting closer....)
------------------------lol---2----------------o----------- (Awkward turle for effect)
------------------------lol2----------------------o--------- (It's on him! not the turle dumbo!)
------------------------------------------------------------- (he's gone :L)
222222222222222222222222222lol222222222222 (He's lost in a flock of swans!)
Save him! Help him! :)
Too be continued........
----------------------------lol------------------------------- (He's drowning again)
---------------------------lol---------------2---------------- (Theres a swan)
--------------------------lol-------2--------------------- (its getting closer....)
------------------------lol---2----------------o----------- (Awkward turle for effect)
------------------------lol2----------------------o--------- (It's on him! not the turle dumbo!)
------------------------------------------------------------- (he's gone :L)
222222222222222222222222222lol222222222222 (He's lost in a flock of swans!)
Save him! Help him! :)
Too be continued........
A new poll!
Right guys, I opened a new poll all about Bob! (Super small mini stickman) answer it peeps!!
Well guys
Well my good friends!
the results are in!!
the winner with all the 100% votes is............. to ramble on like an old grumpy man!! So here it goes....
*someone says about computers* Oh these computer things! Back in the old days we didn't have all this digital nonesense! We had pens, paper, and a typewriter! *someone mentions war* Oh the war! I fought for my country saving lives and making it so you young'ns wouldn't have to speak German! Oh then you go and learn German in school anyway! It's like you don't even care! Then to make it even worse! You compare me to a dinosaur! I'm not that old! Too mention it..... I'm not old I'm experienced!! Oh grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr blah blah blah drone drone drone.....
So guys how'd you like it? rare? Medium? Overcooked? *whispered too* Oh right not a cooking channel, ummmmmmm *whispered to again* Well thats all for now guys and gals! See ya'll next time for some more *whispered to for the third time* this is about a what?! A blog?! oh right I remember, so thanks for voting my lovlies and don't forget to check out destinyc99.blogspot.com !!! :)
the results are in!!
the winner with all the 100% votes is............. to ramble on like an old grumpy man!! So here it goes....
*someone says about computers* Oh these computer things! Back in the old days we didn't have all this digital nonesense! We had pens, paper, and a typewriter! *someone mentions war* Oh the war! I fought for my country saving lives and making it so you young'ns wouldn't have to speak German! Oh then you go and learn German in school anyway! It's like you don't even care! Then to make it even worse! You compare me to a dinosaur! I'm not that old! Too mention it..... I'm not old I'm experienced!! Oh grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr blah blah blah drone drone drone.....
So guys how'd you like it? rare? Medium? Overcooked? *whispered too* Oh right not a cooking channel, ummmmmmm *whispered to again* Well thats all for now guys and gals! See ya'll next time for some more *whispered to for the third time* this is about a what?! A blog?! oh right I remember, so thanks for voting my lovlies and don't forget to check out destinyc99.blogspot.com !!! :)
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